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    Mechana Dragon

    Post  kimiRAIKKONEN on Fri Sep 02, 2011 5:15 am



    Comm,and please be as clear because i am from Serbia..Very Happy
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    Re: Mechana Dragon

    Post  LOLLOLAGE on Fri Sep 02, 2011 6:01 am

    Well I can't find a real focal in the signature,so I don't know where I should look in particular.
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    Re: Mechana Dragon

    Post  Buscape on Fri Sep 02, 2011 6:04 am

    like it...good colours nice depth...but Lollo is right,i dont know where is the focal stari Very Happy
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    Re: Mechana Dragon

    Post  zenron on Fri Sep 02, 2011 6:24 am

    Lollo is right on this one I think. The reason being that it the dragon blends into too much with the background, which makes the sig as a whole seem unfocused, and as the viewer, my eyes aren't drawn to any spot in particular.
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    Re: Mechana Dragon

    Post  kimiRAIKKONEN on Fri Sep 02, 2011 10:12 pm

    Thanks,I am aware of the mistake..
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    Re: Mechana Dragon

    Post  Yurtles on Fri Sep 02, 2011 10:18 pm

    To fix it, simply blur some bits, and sharpen some others Smile
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    Re: Mechana Dragon

    Post  kimiRAIKKONEN on Fri Sep 02, 2011 10:44 pm

    I was sharpen whole work,and deleated some parts,but i didn blur..Very Happy I will fix that thank you..Very Happy
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    Re: Mechana Dragon

    Post  harbinger297 on Sun Sep 04, 2011 1:03 am

    Really nice piece, if you can define the focal it will be a great piece.
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    Re: Mechana Dragon

    Post  fryerc on Sun Sep 04, 2011 4:33 am

    is it possible for you to post the render as i would like to use it
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    Re: Mechana Dragon

    Post  kimiRAIKKONEN on Sun Sep 04, 2011 5:44 am



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    Re: Mechana Dragon

    Post  fryerc on Sun Sep 04, 2011 6:29 am

    thanks

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