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    Post  LOLLOLAGE on Mon Sep 12, 2011 11:08 pm



    Start commenting ladies.
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    Post  phlipster on Tue Sep 13, 2011 1:46 am

    The cut-out looks low quality (pixelated). Also it could do with blending into the background more (maybe place some of the background balls and wireframes in front of the cut-out). Currently the text is more of a focal than the cut-out, so you may want to make it smaller and move it so it sits on the bottom third line.
    It is a good concept though and the colours work well together Smile


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    Post  Giammaio on Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:01 am

    I thought there was meant to be some flow?

    But the quality and the overall of the tags looks neat, nice tag.
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    Post  zenron on Fri Oct 14, 2011 3:53 am

    Heh, what Gian said. For a sig about flow Lollo, there isn't really much of it in this sig. It really isn't what I would say defines this as a sig. It's the text here that really breaks the flow a little bit, because it's kind of obtrusive.
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    Re: Flow Flow Flow

    Post  Genetic Engineer on Sat Oct 15, 2011 8:00 pm

    That split between the purple and the orange on the right is really distracting, the two parts of the sig just don't work together very well. And then like others have said the text doesn't really help the sig.


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